- More Kody
- More Minnesota
- More about the creepy guy
- Less visual imagery from Kody's brother
- Bigger surprise at the end
The above items are all doable, but the ending is a tad bit more difficult. I have a good idea of how to ramp it up, but I must be very careful not to change too much so that the entire story isn't altered. There's no need to rewrite the entire thing! I'll report back my progress...