First reader comments are in

I received my first comments on the draft copy of book #2 from a friend yesterday. For the most part, he seemed to enjoy the story and was satisfied with the ending. He had one issue with Kody's response, or lack of response, to an issue, which didn't really surprise me because while writing that part I wondered the same thing. I apparently thought I could get away with it. I'll be interested to hear if the other readers feel the same way. If this review is anything like Missing Maggie, the readers will have a lot of the same comments. However, this time it will be even more interesting to compare the male vs female aspect. I'm not sure it will really make a difference, but we'll see.